Friday, 23 June 2017

Literacy Reflection

This week in Literacy we did a piece of writing on a family member and I did it on my Grandad. We had to tell you what he looked like. It was hard but easy.  My goal was to include more detail in my writing.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Harris it is Milan from Pohutukawa 1.
    I like how you have used diffrent types of adjectives.
    I like how you did it on our Grandad.
    I agree with you when you said his head is as round as doughnut.
    Maybe next time you could add a bit more writing.
    How long did it take you to make it ?


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