This week m1 Literacy did writing on Miss Reissman. I liked it but it was hard because you had to think really hard of what you were going to write to describe her.
Hi Harris, I really enjoyed reading your descriptive sentences. You have successfully used similes to add interest to your writing. I especially like how you have compared Miss Reissmann's hair to a shiny fishing lure. Next time you could add some descriptive sentences about your characters personality to give a more complete description. Keep up the great work, Mrs P.
Hi Harris, I really enjoyed reading your descriptive sentences. You have successfully used similes to add interest to your writing. I especially like how you have compared Miss Reissmann's hair to a shiny fishing lure. Next time you could add some descriptive sentences about your characters personality to give a more complete description. Keep up the great work, Mrs P.
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