Aloha Harris. My name is Toa from Wainui Beach School in Gisborne. I like how you added that you're funny like the joker, got any jokes that you can tell me? Your metaphors are awesome, my favorite one is how you said you're like sleeping beauty because it reminds me of myself because i LOVE to sleep. Do you play any games? You might want to check your spelling next time, but it was awesome commenting on your blog hope to see more in the future
Hey there Harris, I'm Obe from Wainui Beach School. I love this piece of work that is why I chose you. I love how you have amazing pictures to go with the amazing commentary. It reminds me of me because I am loud and I LOVE to sleep in. I think one little thing you could work on is your spelling because of the Audi part were you spelt fast wrong. Great job on the work keep it up!
Kia ora Harris I'm Felix from Wainui Beach School in Gisborne. I love this piece of work because you added lots of detail about yourself and described yourself how you feel. This reminds me of how our class did some artwork about our self. Have you ever tried surfing? I surf lots! From Felix!!
Hi Harris I'm Carter from Wainui Beach School in Gisborne. I really like this piece of work because of the way you described the things you were. But maybe next time recheck your spelling because you spelt frast instead of fast. I also like the way you laid it out. Have you ever tried surfing or Fortnite? We surf alot here. From Carter.
Aloha Harris. My name is Toa from Wainui Beach School in Gisborne. I like how you added that you're funny like the joker, got any jokes that you can tell me? Your metaphors are awesome, my favorite one is how you said you're like sleeping beauty because it reminds me of myself because i LOVE to sleep. Do you play any games? You might want to check your spelling next time, but it was awesome commenting on your blog hope to see more in the future
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ReplyDeleteI'm Obe from Wainui Beach School. I love this piece of work that is why I chose you. I love how you have amazing pictures to go with the amazing commentary. It reminds me of me because I am loud and I LOVE to sleep in. I think one little thing you could work on is your spelling because of the Audi part were you spelt fast wrong. Great job on the work keep it up!
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Kia ora Harris I'm Felix from Wainui Beach School in Gisborne. I love this piece of work because you added lots of detail about yourself and described yourself how you feel. This reminds me of how our class did some artwork about our self. Have you ever tried surfing? I surf lots! From Felix!!
ReplyDeleteHi Harris I'm Carter from Wainui Beach School in Gisborne. I really like this piece of work because of the way you described the things you were. But maybe next time recheck your spelling because you spelt frast instead of fast. I also like the way you laid it out. Have you ever tried surfing or Fortnite? We surf alot here.
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