This week in Literacy we did a piece of writing on a family member and I did it on my Grandad. We had to tell you what he looked like. It was hard but easy. My goal was to include more detail in my writing.
Hi Harris it is Milan from Pohutukawa 1. I like how you have used diffrent types of adjectives. I like how you did it on our Grandad. I agree with you when you said his head is as round as doughnut. Maybe next time you could add a bit more writing. How long did it take you to make it ?
Hi Harris it is Milan from Pohutukawa 1.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used diffrent types of adjectives.
I like how you did it on our Grandad.
I agree with you when you said his head is as round as doughnut.
Maybe next time you could add a bit more writing.
How long did it take you to make it ?